Score: 10

"hmph"

submission: Mastermind 2

date: January 20, 2008

what a surprise.. swain doing gay jokes again as a front to cover up his own homosexuality.

xxx

Score: 10

"hah!"

submission: A Tribute to Cuboy!

date: December 22, 2007

i can't believe i only just got down to watching this. it's hilarious, thanks for being a fan and possibly being on drugs.

kisses from edible castle.

Score: 8

"fun, fun."

submission: Going Grim

date: October 23, 2007

this is a really fun cartoon to watch. it runs smoothly and it made me chuckle, i really enjoyed it. i was pleasantly surprised. well done, and i hope you'll do some more toons. josh tomar really is a great voice actor, too, people should use him more often.

Score: 0

"bah"

submission: Awesome Compilation Vol 1

date: August 14, 2007

each month you'll release a new cartoon that's the exact same low effort, recycled comedy as the last one.

i look forward to it.

Score: 3

"hmm."

submission: Zombie Infection

date: August 6, 2007

i thought it was pretty poor. your art and animation wasn't terrible, but pretty bog-standard. the only way you'll ever get better and make things that appeal to a wider audience is if you break out of this overused anime/manga influence. try, at least, to make it your own style with slight influences of what you enjoy. because if you don't, it just looks like you're trying to copy anime but falling short.

in terms of story - it's good that you've been influenced by a variation of the zombie genre, instead of just sticking to the typical unexplained zombie infestation or resident evil spinoff. i say it a lot, but there are better - much better - voice actors out there who will happily do your voices for free and have better quality equipment and a better idea of how to do it. don't just go for your first choices or friends. search around. hype your movie up so that people who are good get interested. put the work into it and you'll reap the benefits.

and also, in relation to your art, style, and general choice of what is in your toon (the story, if you will) - it really says something of your age - or perhaps the age you are deep inside - when you take the time to draw out a girl bent over a railing in one of the most awkward and unrealistic positions i've ever seen just so you can detail her ass.

i kind of laughed, more than thought it was a good attempt at a short, intense thriller toon. it's not that it sucked, but just that i reckon you can do better.

Score: 10

"this town ain't big enough..."

submission: BM: (ep.1) Walkin'

date: February 9, 2007

there is quite a resemblance indeed between our little cuboy and your little blockman. maybe they're distant cousins. people, don't attack poor blockman. it's his turf, he was here first. now we're sharing it.

i liked it when the people stared at him. :)

Score: 10

"brilliant work cuboy"

submission: Cuboy Ep.1

date: February 8, 2007

although i think u stole my idea cuz u see i invented the square, thus the cube

we're going to be FAMOUS, will, because of that cute little bugger

FAMOUS BEYOND OUR WILDEST DREAMS

Score: 10

"perfect."

submission: little frog

date: February 7, 2007

brillaint. i loved every second of it. i think this is my favourite animation ever on newgrounds (and i don't write that in evry review, unlike some :)).

keep up the good work.

Score: 6

"good."

submission: Ida's Luck - Part 1

date: January 22, 2007

i've seen your other stuff, to which i haven't been very fond of, but this is very interesting. you've done well to keep me engaged with the story and what lies beyond the little girl and her life.

that being said, however, the narration is lacking. it barely manages to stay within the quality of the art and animation; luckily, the lad's accent was genuine; a poor accent attempt would have made things much worse. he doesn't SOUND scary, but he also doesn't sound like he's TRYING to be scary, so that might be on purpose. either way, it doesn't really hit the mark. i'd try something a bit creepier. think tim burton. calming, soothing, almost reassuring - but with a sense of threat lookimg within.

a good example of a storytelling voice:
myspace. com/thespiritchild

watch 'the spirit child' cartoon. :)

Score: 10

"great."

submission: MoreLikeBlue: Ep 3

date: January 17, 2007

sometimes when you're involved heavily in something, you're too busy looking at it in a different light to realise what the public like best about it. reading through all the reviews, i'm so happy with the response and how this episode came out. thanks for letting me be the voice of blue, brady. we'll keep playing with his voice until we get it perfect. :)

grats on the daily and weekly awards, you stud. <3